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Hamden High School
David Abate
Elizabeth Alexander
Garry Apgar
Profe Auriemme
John Aurora
Barbara Bennitt
Barbara Bennitt
Moira T. Birmingham
Yvette Budrow
stephanie butler
Valerie Canalori
Mike Capone
paul catino
JOHN CENERI
Mr. Chamberlain
Mindy Chesanek
Mrs. Chludzinski
Scott Coladarci
David Coss
Lisa Crandall
Nancy Davis
Tony DeAngelo
Tamara DeCarter
Beth DeLancy
Steve DelGrego
Matthew Dole
Ydalia Domingues
John Donarum
Heather Doucette
Elaine Edwards
Nicholas Federn
Jill Feldman
Peter Finch
Ms. Forcucci
Christine Frumento
Mr. Gabriel
Santo Galatioto
Barbarann Gay
Nancy C Graham
Team H
Kathleen Halloran
Richard Harris
Bill Harrison - AP
Bill Harrison - Freshmen
Leonora Henderson
Richard Hicks
Peggy Holdash
Linda Kane
Jennifer Kendall
Michael Kozera
Peter Laffin
Mr. Leone
Gina Lidzbarski
Gina Liguori
Bryce Lindamood
Bryce Lindamood
nina lujack
John Majernicek
Elizabeth Marini
Kate Marshall
Carolyn Martin
Christopher McCarty
Elisa McCulley
paula mcdonnell
Nancy Miles
Suzanna Nyberg
Russell Olson
Albert Oneto
Daniel Osborn
Charles Perrotti, III
Richard Pershan
George Peterman
George Peterman
William Phinney
Carole Pollard
Dominique Rakiec
Victoria Rivas
Joe Rizzo
Paula Rochniak
Stacey Sandler
Michele Santoro
Stefanie Savo
Meghan Scheck
Nick Schuler
Paul Scoffone
William Sommer
Lisa Stamidis
lorraine stevens
Tracy Stockwell
kristen tassiello
Patricia Taylor
Christopher Thomas
Elizabeth Young Thomas Vece
Kristen Valenti
Jaime Vartanian
Meaghan Walsh
Minta White
Jeanne Wilson
Elizabeth Young
Exp. Writing, period 8
Exp. Writing, period 8 Message Board
Past Events and Homework
Song essay
November 16, 2009
Objective: To find lyrics to a song and use it as the basis for a creative story.

Students will print lyrics and then write prolifically to start an original fiction story based on the ideas and lyrics of a song.
Once Now reflection and share
November 10, 2009
Objective: to learn how to reflect, revise, and rewrite the Once Now essay. To observe and respond to the Once Now essay.

Students will write a reflection on their revisions and rewritings. Students will also share their papers for observations.
Once Now Essay Finish
November 9, 2009
Objective: to finish drafting the Once Now Essay.

Students will write the last section and conclusion of their Once Now essays. When students finish they will revise and rewrite their papers with a partner.

HW - final draft of Once Now Essay
Once Now Essay final
November 6, 2009
Objective: To finish rewriting and revising Once Now essay.

Students will use observations from yesterday's groups to inform rewriting and revising of their papers. Students will finish conclusions and paper.
Once Now group obs.
November 5, 2009
Objective: To create observations and reflect on the groups observations to aid future writing.

Students will work in groups to read and respond to their papers using observations. By the end of class, students will have completed their observation sheets and hand them in for a grade.

HW - have rough draft ready for a grade check Friday
Once Now essay day 2
November 4, 2009
Objective: To write intro. for Once Now paper and to expand prolific writing into a coherent body of a paper.

Students will use ideas in their prolific writings to create a Once Now paper. Students will write the intro. balancing both the Once and Now ideas. Then, students will use ideas from prolific writing to establish the two sides of their essay.

HW - finish rough draft. Group review tomorrow.
Once/Now
November 2, 2009
Objective: To look at good literature and to reflect on changes in life.

Students will write the sentence, "Once I was...,Now I am..." completing it appropriately for their lives. Once this is done 4-5 times, students will write prolifically for 10 minutes on the first part.

HW - 10 min prolific writing on the "now" part.
Freshman Guide sharing
October 29, 2009
Objective: To improve writing by sharing and observing Freshman Guide essays.

Students will share essays and visual materials with the class. Students will also write observations on papers.
Freshman Guide pamphlets and posters
October 28, 2009
Objective: To create visual materials to accompany Freshman Guide essays.

Students will work in D302 to finish visual materials for essay on freshman advice.

HW - final drafts and pamphlet or posters due tomorrow. Be prepared to share your work. :)
Freshman Guide revisions
October 27, 2009
Objective: To revise and rewrite for a final draft of Freshman Guide essay.

Students will revise and rewrite their Freshman Guide essays. Level 9 students will work on a poster or pamphlet to accompany their essay. Focus on making your materials interesting and informative.
Freshman Guide peer review
October 26, 2009
Objective: To share and receive feedback on Freshman Guide essays.

Students will work in groups of 3-4 to read and revise their Freshman Guide essay.

HW - revise papers for final draft. Comp lab tomorrow D302.
Style presentations and Good writing
October 16, 2009
Objective: To expand ideas of good writing and to share ideas of different writing styles.

Students will read and reflect on writing styles. Students will also read and observe qualities of good writing from student exemplars.
Style Variations
October 15, 2009
Objectives: To explore different writing styles.

Students will brainstorm and create their own unique writing styles. Students will type (if possible) their work in the computer lab. Polished work will be presented in class. Be ready! Pictures are a bonus.

Style day 2 - Style variations
October 14, 2009
Objective: To understand how writing can vary in style. To begin forming different writing styles.

Students will read and compare and contrast readings from Queneau's variations. Students will then brainstorm and compose their own unique writing styles.

Remember to make your styles unique!

Spinach and Cheeeze Dooodles is how I roll.
Style!
October 13, 2009
What does it mean to have style?

Objective: To have students explore the idea of style in their lives and think about how style applies to writing too.

Students will answer questions and discuss issues of style in life today and reflect on their own lives.
Simple exp. essay final draft
October 9, 2009
Objective: to rewrite and proofread final draft of simple exp. essay.

Students will hand in their final simple expository essays. Level 7's will hand in one. Level 9's will hand in two papers.
Simple exp. essay revisions
October 8, 2009
Objective: To work collaboratively to observe and revise essays.

Students will work in groups to share, observe, and reflect on papers for final drafts.
Simple exp. essay 3
October 7, 2009
Objective: To revise and proofread drafts of simple exp. essay.

Students will finish essays in the computer lab and label parts accordingly. Level 9 students will write another simple exp. essay based on a concrete experience.
Simple exp. essay 2
October 6, 2009
Objective: to complete rough draft of simple exp. essay.

Students will continue drafting simple exp. essay, using the guidelines from yesterday. Students will also number each step as they proceed.
Simple Expository Essay
October 5, 2009
Objective: To review the steps of writing expository essays. To create a simple expository essay using the skills of concrete and abstract writing.

Students will examine the steps used to write previous essays. Using this guideline, students will write a simple expository essay on a term:

nonsense, choosing, coincidence, success, quality, generosity, inexperience, welcome, vanity, silence, fair treatment, or foolishness.

HW - prolific writing on word (10 minutes).
Simple Expository Essay
October 2, 2009
Objective: To practice using the abstract, concrete, abstract/concrete structure of the expository essay.

Students will write a simple expository essay on selected topics.
Good literature observations
October 1, 2009
Objective: To analyze elements of good literature and improve writing observations.

Students will read and write observations on examples of good literature. Students will also share observations and reflect on others' perspectives.
Group writing exercise
September 30, 2009
Objective: To write creatively as a team.

Students will write a creative story in a group, exploring the nature of different perspectives.
College Essay self reflection
September 29, 2009
Objective: To analyze important qualities in college essays and evaluate according to these qualities.

Students will finish college essays and complete a self reflection and evaluation.
Song Story (homework)
Due Date: May 7, 2009
Students choose a song and then write the story behind the song. Students integrate the lyrics and themes of the song into an original story.
Downloads
Song Story Rubric (25.09 KB)
Song Story draft
May 4, 2009
Students will have a draft of their story based on their chosen song.
Song Story (homework)
Due Date: April 29, 2009
Students will choose a song and create an original story based on its lyrics.
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Song Story assignment (25.09 KB)
Fairy Tale Satire (homework)
Due Date: April 6, 2009
Students will create a satire on a fairy tale using the elements of exaggeration, incongruity, reversal, and parody.

Due: Thursday 4/9
Once/Now Essay Final Draft (homework)
Due Date: March 30, 2009
Have your final draft ready with your rough draft, observation sheet, prewriting, and grading sheet.
Once/Now Rough Draft (homework)
Due Date: March 26, 2009
Rough Drafts of Once/Now essay due. Have a copy ready to share with your group for observations.
Once/Now Essay (homework)
Due Date: March 24, 2009
Follow the guidelines in the handout for the Once/Now Essay. Remember to use seed sentences like "Once I was.... Now I am....".
Rough draft due Thursday
Final draft due Fri or Mon.
Style pieces
March 20, 2009
Take either the story from the packet ("Notation") or your own original story, and rewrite it in at least 3 different styles. The styles need to be different from the ones in the packet. Be orginal and creative!
Simple Expository Essay
March 16, 2009
Simple Exp. Essay on an assigned word. Check with me in B206 for the handout. Be sure to follow the FCA's too: 1. abstract intro and insightful conclusion, 2.specific story to illustrate your idea, 3. correct comma use.
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SEE Observation sheet (29.18 KB)
SEE Essay Rubric (28.67 KB)
Family Story (homework)
Due Date: February 23, 2009
Final draft of Family story due today. Have your final draft, rough draft, observation sheet, prewriting, and grading sheet as well. Be sure to read the grading sheet carefully to make sure you have completed the assignment correctly and fully.
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Document 1 (125.44 KB)
Class Downloads
Essay Rubric Lines 7.doc
Departmental Essay Rubric (43.52 KB)
My Favorite Resources
The Elements of Style by Wm. Strunk, Jr.
Asserting that one must first know the rules to break them, this classic reference book is a must-have for any student and conscientious writer. Intended for use in which the practice of composition is combined with the study of literature, it gives in brief space the principal requirements of plain English style and concentrates attention on the rules of usage and principles of composition most commonly violated.
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Hamden High School
Christopher McCarty
Classes
English 15, periods 2, 6
English 17, period 4
English 19, period 1
Exp. Writing, period 8
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